Oh how sad!

Yes, it is weird how you get the feeling that you connected to some people who are suffering a lot.
Your poem was very strong, and managed not to be repetitive in a bad way, because the words were so sad, and carried so much aching emotion in them that I didn't get tired of hearing them, the haunting melody of "within a month or so..."
I hope that you and this girl both keep strong and brave for whatever lies ahead.

//T.L.//

That poem actually really touched me. It just gets into you and makes you feel so much for that little girl. Absolutely beautiful. You have a rare talent there, don't give it up! 5/5
xxxxx

This poem had so much emotion in it. It was written beautifully. Good work.

A sad poem, that flowed really well. a lot of emotion 5/5

sarah
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Long time no talk my dear but truely an inspiring peice well thought out. You get a rather lovely 5. Stay strong sweetie. xxx

That's beautiful...i like the repetition of "in a month or so" it really drew me into the poem...5/5

This is one of the saddest poems I have read in a while. I think you did a good job. I like to read poems like these through the eyes of someone else that is not in the health care field...It's insightful and thought provoking. Excellent job.