All he had to do was love her

by Perfectly Imperfect vaney   Jul 4, 2006


I am no longer numb..and i wrote this one quickly..so sorry if it isn't that great.

She lies in the corner of her room
Pain pouring out of her heart
Waiting for her doom
Love is tearing her apart

She is tired of the pain
Tired of life
Blood starts to pour out of her vein
As she gently uses her knife

I bet he would love her like this
Drowning in her own tears
She dies for just one last kiss
His low voice is all she hears

Why didn't he love her back?
Why didn't he even try?
Was it beauty she lacked?
Why did it hurt her enough to make her cry?

She is crying
But he wouldn't care
She is dying
Would he save her? I bet he wouldn't dare

She closes her eyes
And takes her last breath
She slowly dies
And tastes death

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  • 17 years ago

    by WhYcAnTuLoVeMe

    I love the emotion u layered it on thick!!! The sad thing is this actually happens 2 soo many girls each year.....so anybody thinking of killing urself over a guy PLZ DONT U'LL SEE IN TIME ITZ SOOO NOT WORTH IT!!!!! AND NEITHER IS HE!!! if he cant take the time 2 see wat a wonderful thing he has in his arms and choose 2 chase sum trick who'll give him sum wheneva he wants its HIS loss!!!
    Thanx 4 ur comment vaney!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nada

    Nice...thts pretty good since u wrote it quickly

  • 18 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Awesome job!! the emotion running through it is very strong, i like that!! keep up the great work!! 100/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    Good choice of wording...sentence structure...plenty of feeling...The poem in itself is good...I am not particularly a fan of its content but i show alot of emotion...

  • 18 years ago

    by Charlotte

    Simply outstanding

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