I lvoethe energy nad hte flow of it...adn i can tell ur heart was put int othis..amamzing.
keepp it up hun.

Lissa oxoxo

Simply outstanding

Good choice of wording...sentence structure...plenty of feeling...The poem in itself is good...I am not particularly a fan of its content but i show alot of emotion...

Awesome job!! the emotion running through it is very strong, i like that!! keep up the great work!! 100/5

Nice...thts pretty good since u wrote it quickly

I love the emotion u layered it on thick!!! The sad thing is this actually happens 2 soo many girls each year.....so anybody thinking of killing urself over a guy PLZ DONT U'LL SEE IN TIME ITZ SOOO NOT WORTH IT!!!!! AND NEITHER IS HE!!! if he cant take the time 2 see wat a wonderful thing he has in his arms and choose 2 chase sum trick who'll give him sum wheneva he wants its HIS loss!!!
Thanx 4 ur comment vaney!!!