Kirsty --
This poem seemed more thought out to me. There weren`t a bunch of '!' points. I had to glance through a couple of your poems until I found one that wasn`t full of '!'. That`s just not good for ALL of your poems ;; keep that in mind.
The flow of this poem worked out really well. I think that you could have done better on this -- the rhymes were VERY simple, and it was really predictable. But overall, you did a nice job. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This was really sweet. A little short and simplistic but it had a lovely feel-good factor about it and was clearly from the heart.
Nice job.

You are truly an artist with words. :)