That poem was really good. You would be a great poet. Keep writing!!

Nicely done. Even though the thought of breaking-up is in the back of our minds we all need to remember to just enjoy what is shared in the time being.

-Kayla

You are talented I wrote some new stuff can you comment on it plz if you have the time!!

Wow i really like your flow in this poem. Keep it up!

Heej, I love your poem:) especially the part where you said: Its you that I need inside my heart,
Ill glow forever until we part
You would really make a great poet!
Ow and thanks for commenting On my poem -xxxx-Steffie

A wonderful poem of love. :)

Alot better than the one you commented on of myne but hey some are just born with talent i geuss and your one of them keep at it and don't let the evil monkies get you...they are mean... well good job i give you a 5 star rating

Nice ,nicer, this poem=) I ve enjoyed it a lot! Keep on writing those wonderful poems...

A job well done on this poem. you have a real talent. thanks for the comment on my poem, im no where near as good as you tho :) keep up the good work. rach xx

Awesoome i loved the line "we belong together , you're the key, i'm the lock"

so imaginative

well done

i've added u to my favourites so i can catch up with all your latest poems!

from sophie :)

I really love this poem. Its very open and to the point, but romantic at the same time... very good...

Hey. thanks for tha comment. and i really loved this poem. your a great writer. so keep it up. i love your stuff. good job*

I like this poem a lot, it's very sweet. =) The only negative thing I have to say about your poetry is you kinda go exclimation crazy!! But it's not a big enough thing to ruin you're poetry because you're still very good..just thought I would give you my input =D

x.xBrokenx.x

Ooooh, I like this one. :) :)

I loved it and thanks for commenting on my poem stuff :D

Kirsty your writing is so great u are really good please write because cant stop reading your poems x x

We belong together, you’re the key, im the lock!

I liked that line a lot. Very cute! Jpoet*

Hey great poem =) 5/5 keep it up girl and thanx 4 ur comment on my poem!!