Great inspirational message. Nice write, even though I didn't understand everything. lol Keep it up |
by Heather
I loved the way you wrote it. And the message was such a good one. It really made me think. |
Very imaginative metaphors I like it |
by RetroRavey
A very good poem, and it carries a hard message for me... so I won't say much more. 5/5 |
I agree that life IS too short 2 dwell on the past, but sometimes its hard to let it go. anyway, wow great work, liked the message and wording. 5/5 |