by Dracula Jul 4, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
My knees collapse |
Hey man, nice poem, not as good as ur first, but it's still good. The short lines were the thing that killed it for me, but it's just an opinion. Keep writing dude! ttyl |
Hey Brian! yeah, plan didn't work. Lol. meh. make a friend. brilliant poem (told u it was a good idea to join, didn't i) |