Hey Brian! yeah, plan didn't work. Lol. meh. make a friend. brilliant poem (told u it was a good idea to join, didn't i)
very very you. lol
ttyl,
-Suzie

Hey man, nice poem, not as good as ur first, but it's still good. The short lines were the thing that killed it for me, but it's just an opinion. Keep writing dude! ttyl