Her brother...

by Dani   Jul 5, 2006


A lifeless body left on the floor,
Just one of many the little girl saw
A young male teenager had just died
Was it murder? Or was it suicide?
She takes a look at him only to see
That her older brother was finally free
His face was so pale, he was lying so still
She was crying like crazy, as she sat on the window sill
Her heart had sunk, her eyes dropped
The pain, the misery was all to much
She took one more step and fell to her knees
A sight that no body ever sees
Her brother lying dead on the ground
Was exactly what she'd just found
She grabs a blade from the floor
One of many the little girl saw
A young male teenager had just died
It wasn't murder, it was suicide!

*Hey guys, can u plz vote and comment! ill try to do the same!*

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I love this poem. well written, sad, simple. great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Broken Dreams

    Awwwwww thats sooo sad yet soooo good!!!!! Excellently written....5/5!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Oh my god. I'm in love with this poem. It litterally brought tears to my eyes. Awesome job. And don't stop writing. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by ebony

    Hey this is a realy nice poem, im sorry if the events in this poem were true.. .

  • 18 years ago

    by Hilary Day

    This was very good.. I really do enjoy your work..Kepp them coming..