Thats so sad i felt really scared and intimidated for you while reading it. well written :). Love u to comment on any of mine.

This one has nothing to do with my own expriences it just came to me one night

He tells the other person to LEAVE!!
((I do not think you should capalize leave...))

Now, I like the concept of the poem and the emotion you put into it, but the flow was really off...You might want to check that. Otherwise, very nicely done.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5