Hmmmm idk

by Naomi   Jul 5, 2006


I see you by the river,
As i lean next to the tree.
You put your hand in the water,
And feel the rivers heart run freely through your fingers.

You take off your shoes,
And stand in the river.
The moonlight, only being our candle,
And the water dark as the sky,
Reflects all the stars,
Including the one in front of my eyes.

I think to myself:
" I'm truely blessed,
That she's with me.
Before her,
I was nothing but a mess!
And now that she's with me,
She saved me from all my wrong doings.
I'll never regret this,
Now that i realize,
I'd be nothing or not even living,
If it wasnt for her,
My soul would die!
I'll never forget,
That i love her."

-Tell me what you think and also if you can help me with a title that would be great :) Thanx for reading this-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney

    This is really good! I don't have any ideas for a title though, sorry. Keep up the good work!

    -*La Little Lor Lor*