by Jacob Perry Jul 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
As I sift through the day |
by LadyPearl
I meant each stanza |
by LadyPearl
Pretty good. Nice use of words. I found this poem a little confusing, maybe you could relate it to the title more. It's stanza seems to refer to something different. You forgot the "I" in "infinite" ^-^ Keep it up |
by Pyrovengance
Hey babe, long time no talk...... just thought i'd leave a good comment or sumthin and make your day. - great poem btw - loved it. So did my friend wade, he said it was awsome to! |
by Pure Silence
Well done ^_^ I like -pitter pat- its too cute Lol im wierd I know, keep it up Love ^_^ |
Excellent, as always! you have so much talent!!! keep it up. |