Excellent, as always! you have so much talent!!! keep it up.
-xXx-

Well done ^_^ I like -pitter pat- its too cute Lol im wierd I know, keep it up Love ^_^

Jenn

Hey babe, long time no talk...... just thought i'd leave a good comment or sumthin and make your day. - great poem btw - loved it. So did my friend wade, he said it was awsome to!

Much love ~ Jess

Pretty good. Nice use of words. I found this poem a little confusing, maybe you could relate it to the title more. It's stanza seems to refer to something different. You forgot the "I" in "infinite" ^-^ Keep it up

I meant each stanza