OMG this was such a good write...the moral of your poem is so clear and consice on a subject that had plagued our society. Predators are all around, not just hiding in the shadows.
In my opinion this was a most excellent write!!

Such a strong poem. Nice subject... Wonderfully written!

Great poem! so tru also!

Wow, i loved the message in this. You're right there are alot fo sick people out there now a days. Kids really need to be careful, I'm gald someone wrote about this, maybe people will listen.

I really liked these lines

"naive little candidates
unholy intruders often outsmart"

Good job

--Steph