Comments : I am who I am

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I do care for you hunni, you are my special frined, rmember!! I know how its like to feel unloved and unwanted and I am so sorry that you have to go through all of this, you don't deserve it....Wish that I could take your pain away...

    Love you girl -- Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    A powerful piece once again very touxhing hun a sad write

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. This was really good. And I can relate a little to it aswell.

    I loved these lines:
    "I still love that woman very much,
    but she just helped ruin my whole life"

    You've just took how I was feeling about my mother right out of my mouth for me. Thanks. This was a great poem. And I'm sorry if it's true. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Steffje

    Heej,
    I just wanted to let you know that i really know what you mean!
    ive been to somesort of the same thing, Fosterhomes, youthshelter for 10 years and i know how tough it is when you feel like no one wants you,
    I love your poem and Im sure everything will be much better one day just like its with me, I trully feel for you
    Good luck -xxxx- Steffie

  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Wow that was really sad. Excellent flow

  • Amanda I Admire You For Your Talent & The Deceny You Had To Request No Sympathy...Just Mere Understanding For Your Situation And The Worse Off Situations Out There In The World Today, It Must Have Been Horrible For You Hun...I Move Alot Too...I Have Sense I Was Little...Its Hard To Adjust, But I Can Relate 101%...Awesome Job
    *Hoping One Day You'll Find Your Happy Ending*
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo 5/5

  • Great write!! Flow and rhyme were good!!! I can relate a little!! Like ☆;×;Nαtαlie;×;☆ said i loved these lines

    "I still love that woman very much,
    but she just helped ruin my whole life"

    Great Job 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    That was a very powerful poem. I would understand needing to express yourself, and you did it really well. The flow and rhymes in this poem were great. That's terrible, such a sad story, and it sucks to know it's true. I hope you're alright now!.. Good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Awww this is really sad. I think you expressed yourself well as emotions are always difficult to word.
    Nice piece well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by SufferingAlone

    Hey.....i LOVE this poem......and it kinda describes how my lyf is......i dont feel sorry for u.....but i do want u to know that no matter what happens there will always be someone out there to care for u......it could be anyone....!!!! but yeah this is one of the best poems ive read so far today...and keep it them comeing......one day u'll be able to get this out there...and someone will finally listen to how u feel......so yeah.......good work