I do care for you hunni, you are my special frined, rmember!! I know how its like to feel unloved and unwanted and I am so sorry that you have to go through all of this, you don't deserve it....Wish that I could take your pain away... |
by dora
A powerful piece once again very touxhing hun a sad write |
by Natalie
Wow. This was really good. And I can relate a little to it aswell. |
by Steffje
Heej, |
Wow that was really sad. Excellent flow |
Amanda I Admire You For Your Talent & The Deceny You Had To Request No Sympathy...Just Mere Understanding For Your Situation And The Worse Off Situations Out There In The World Today, It Must Have Been Horrible For You Hun...I Move Alot Too...I Have Sense I Was Little...Its Hard To Adjust, But I Can Relate 101%...Awesome Job |
Great write!! Flow and rhyme were good!!! I can relate a little!! Like ☆;×;Nαtαlie;×;☆ said i loved these lines |
by Darien
That was a very powerful poem. I would understand needing to express yourself, and you did it really well. The flow and rhymes in this poem were great. That's terrible, such a sad story, and it sucks to know it's true. I hope you're alright now!.. Good poem! |
Awww this is really sad. I think you expressed yourself well as emotions are always difficult to word. |
Hey.....i LOVE this poem......and it kinda describes how my lyf is......i dont feel sorry for u.....but i do want u to know that no matter what happens there will always be someone out there to care for u......it could be anyone....!!!! but yeah this is one of the best poems ive read so far today...and keep it them comeing......one day u'll be able to get this out there...and someone will finally listen to how u feel......so yeah.......good work |