Our Time

by Liquid Dreams   Jul 5, 2006


Our beautiful daughter,
We love you, it's true
But what we must tell you
Is so hard to do

One dark peaceful night
No one was awake
But in the black stillness
And intruder did quake

We protected you with love
And died for your care
What we are sorry for
Is that we're not there

We're sorry that you're weak
We're sorry for your tears
We're sorry that you've been living
Alone for all these years

We wanted to be with you
You were just a baby then
But we love you so much
We'd die for you again

Be strong through all the pain
Be happy and truly live
Please know that our lives
Were all that we could give

Don't ever feel like you're to blame
For this ever-horrible crime
The reason we died was not your fault
It just simply was our time

[Done for contest...and I got third place. Not that good, I know - it was written last minute. Please read/rate/comment, and I will do the same to you!]

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awww that was so sad, yet at the same time so sweet! I love poems like that! The flow and rhyme were very good. There was a lot of emotion in it. Great job!

    Cayce x

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    You really dont think it was good? i actually loved it.. id sorta like to know if it was based on your own life. if so.. im really sorry. but yea.. youve gotta way with your words.
    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Such an emotional piece, great job for a last minuet thing, keep writing and take care hun Sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    I absolutely love this sad poem!! I think it is excellent!! Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    In this poem u love your daughter it is clear. But
    We died for u This line didn't clear me.
    Please clear it to me.