by Liquid Dreams Jul 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Our beautiful daughter, |
Awww that was so sad, yet at the same time so sweet! I love poems like that! The flow and rhyme were very good. There was a lot of emotion in it. Great job! |
by dee
You really dont think it was good? i actually loved it.. id sorta like to know if it was based on your own life. if so.. im really sorry. but yea.. youve gotta way with your words. |
by sarah
Such an emotional piece, great job for a last minuet thing, keep writing and take care hun Sarah x |
by Kelly
I absolutely love this sad poem!! I think it is excellent!! Well done! |
by Jyoti Rawat
In this poem u love your daughter it is clear. But |