Omg i really like this poem and it is very good and deep and sad you should get something for this. keep up the good work._krisanta_

Oh my that was so sad but it hasa nice flow and was alaround good and really deep i like that

Rin

In this poem u love your daughter it is clear. But
We died for u This line didn't clear me.
Please clear it to me.

I absolutely love this sad poem!! I think it is excellent!! Well done!

Such an emotional piece, great job for a last minuet thing, keep writing and take care hun Sarah x

You really dont think it was good? i actually loved it.. id sorta like to know if it was based on your own life. if so.. im really sorry. but yea.. youve gotta way with your words.
dee

Awww that was so sad, yet at the same time so sweet! I love poems like that! The flow and rhyme were very good. There was a lot of emotion in it. Great job!

Cayce x