Comments : I am me

  • 18 years ago

    by October Rain

    This is good this poem is like you dont have your own identy people keep thinkjing you are your sister but its really good i give it a 5/5

    angel

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    "Don't judge my by my sister"

    'My' should be me. But the way this compared how an identity is missing was rather well if a little short. It could have had just a little bit more but was well for its length. Thought that it had some nice emotional play but didn't like some of the words that though heightened the emotions at the same time did dampen them in the end.. But yes it had this quality that made it a good read.
    ~Faith-less