This is a wicked cute poem, if i had written it it'd prolly be my fave too. it sint wonderfully written or has great imagery, but in its simplistic nature it rocks. it could be better, it could have more details or better language, and could have been longer but i like the symbolism and the poem, and i think it deserves a 4.7, so im rating it a 5. |
Hey i know why its your favourite, its really well written! great job 5/5 love mel |
by Jessica
Hmm.. I personally think that some of your other poems are better than this one Goran.. The flow was okay but could be improved.. The descriptions were nice but not great.. It was still a nice poem, but I definetely like your others better.. Nice job though 4/5 |
Indeed! this was amazing! Keep writing. :-) |
by donna
'We have hope for a happy tomorrow, |
Beautifuly written. |
by Sarah Ann
And this should be your favorite poem. It is perfectly penned and wonderful! Your words are so strikingly beautiful!!! How many times must I say it?! Keep it up! xxx |
by Randomness
Good golly gosh! (lol) all your poems engulf me with how much emotion you put in them!! i love all of your poems! 5/5 from me again!! |
by catherine
You should be proud of that poem. It is short, but it gets to the point. I thoroughly like this one. |
by Ike Dizzle
I see why it's your favorite. It's freakin awesome. You're great at love poems. I wish mine were like this lol. 5/5 |
by Emma Brown
OMG! That is totally amazing. I loved it very much. I love all your work but this is one of the best pieces, 5/5. |
All of your poems are very good.. the ones I have read at least. But this one.. posesses a different meaning. I loved the flow and emotion. Nice work with this one, it is the best so far. |
by Dana
Something about this poem really aroused my senses...I don't know what...but it's just really beautiful. The diction was perfect...and just amazing! definatly a 5/5 from me! |
by Kristina
Wow this is defiantly really good && i like it a lot. you are such a great writer. i hope you dont ever stop. 5/5 |
by sarah
Hi im sarah and i like your poem too are you 21 year old? and thanx for commenting my poem |
by JoAnna
Hey i like this poem alot and thankz for leaving me a comment on my poem!!!! |
by X2892
WoW it was very good poem u have here 5/5 |
by Lutu
Amazing:) |
10000000/5 |
Excellent poem!!! like all of yours!!! well written and emotional!! well done |