Farewell

by Misstress   Jul 5, 2006


Ive painted a picture
With songs and lullabies
From places and tears
Of memories and lies
Ive traced a picture
With shadows and secrets
From mistakes and fears
Of muted happiness and pretends
Ive painted a picture
With notes and verses on rhymes
From an empty page
Where once lies your remembrance
Ive traced a picture
With smiles and laughters
From the ripples of longings
Of the quivering silence

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  • 18 years ago

    by Flaminia

    This really is amazing...the picture shows perfectly in my mind as I run through your verses...really really sad...but really really true...
    Good flow even though without rhymes,you've got a great stle!

  • 18 years ago

    by Īšŋŧ šħє βєдũţĭƒũļ Ŵħēņ ŝħė ƒą

    Hey beautiful poem! amazing, i really like the way you repeated that one line the whole way through, you kept my attention all the way through. Thank you so much for your comment, it does mean alot to me.
    love Soph

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked it alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is soo good very well wriiten i loved the way you wrote

    " Ive painted a picture" and how you changed it to traced and so on!!! good job

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    It's so...depressing lol. But depressing poems...my favourite. They seem to just hold my attention. Don't ask me why lol. But great poem. Flow was good, vocab was amazing. I don't know what else to say lol. 5/5 xoxo =)

    Samantha

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