by Daenerys Stormborn Jul 5, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Sweet sarcasm rumbling through the halls |
It felt like something I might write if I actually decided on writing something because I am definitely into the whole knight/fantasy thingy. Of course this is far better than anything I might do. Really loved the imagery and the second stanza. Some of the word play in the first was just a tad much. Some really cool words that added to the images. Liked the first line with how it gripped attention. Nicely done. |