by GretaInsideOut Jul 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Can't remember. |
by JaMeS
Aww a sad piece i didnt get it at first but as the second stanza kicked in the meaning of it all unfolded nice :) |
Simple, forceful lines that gave a more sharper tone to this piece than any flowery language. It had this raw....dare I say brutal? way that gave it a more powerful tone. Some nice lines and a good flow. |
by kia
Well done. Very heart felt. Take care. Love u to comment on any of mine. |
Hey hunni i love this its beautiful |