Hey hunni i love this its beautiful

kisses n cuddles

Well done. Very heart felt. Take care. Love u to comment on any of mine.

Simple, forceful lines that gave a more sharper tone to this piece than any flowery language. It had this raw....dare I say brutal? way that gave it a more powerful tone. Some nice lines and a good flow.
~Faith-less

Aww a sad piece i didnt get it at first but as the second stanza kicked in the meaning of it all unfolded nice :)