by Natalie Jul 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Who's that little girl in my reflection, |
by Amber Parker
I love it. The last line is pretty haunting, and I love the basic descriptin 'Silver eyes'. Anyways, I pretty mch love all your work :) |
Yup i added u to my favs like i thought i would |
by BrokenMisery
I felt the ideas in the poem have been very over-done by other poets in the past. You did a good job with the language but the idea seemed very plain so i didn't like it as much. Well written anyhow and good use of repition. |
by Mousie
I can see why you got first place! that was a very good poem and definitely could feel the emotions... great job |
by not a poet
Absolutly love the first stanza! great job once again! keep up the writting! |