Ur poem is beautiful, and this must sound old but i know what it is like to lose someone close. and its not easy all u can do is looked forwards and hold memories dear.

Wow! this poem is so beautiful and really written from the heart. well, not ONLY from the heart because there is amzing writing skills from your brain too!! lol! keep up the good writing and always smile. god decided it was their time. catchy title too! that's why I read ur poem bcos of it's title! plz read sum of my poems if u hav time :) xxxBETHxxx

Nice poem

Extremely sad. Great start and wonderful flow

Wow this poem was so touching
its so sad when someone you love goes
this was a beautiful touching poem
i loved it 5/5

Beautiful. The flow and rhyme came together well and didn't distract from the theme as can so often happen.
The title is lovely too and brings an extra dimension to the poem. Although a sad subject there is still warmth coming through your words showing how weel thought of this person was.
Amazing job well done.