That was really sad but very heart felt every word spoke of a feeling u wanted the reader to feel. well done! love to comment on any of mine :)

This is really, really good. I totally understand this and it is written and flows really well. keep up the great work. I loved reading this and I actually want to read it again! lol! good job xxxBETHxxx plz check out my poems if ya can. fanx

I really like this poem ;)