by Natalie
Noni. This was beautiful. I love the ocean. And, I loved this Acrostic. Your choice of wording was FANTASTIC. You're a great writer! Keep it up! 5/5 |
Your rhymes and rhythm went so smoothly -- i LOVED it!! You`re a great writer, keep it up. I also like how you chose to write a couple of acrostic poems, something not so commonly seem on this site. But i love to read them! I`ll go r/r/c your acrostic poem Rose, like I said I would in your thread =D |
Wow you are sooo good at these kind of poems. You really sould do more! Both of the ones I read are perfect and show a lot of your talent. Great write! 5/5 |
Wow...that was really good. I usually have a hard time writing acrostic poems but you mastered this beautifully, i loved the way it rhymed. Great job. |
by Shawna
Great poem!! I could envision the fish swimming and playing!! Great job!! |
Wow. I loved it! It was short and very well written. I love the vocabulary! Keep up the great job! |
by Nelle
I can not leave a comment as long as these other people b/c i am not good with comments, but that was a very unique poem..great creativity, it was beautiful! i loved it |
by Darien
Wow, amazing imagery. |
by Mj
Very good poem. |
by not a poet
Love this one alot!!! beautiful! |
by Oceansoul
Really beautiful, liked it alot :) |
Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us |
where is it??? |
by Nada
So simple, i like it |
by julie
The imagery created is very powerful, and you have used appropriate words, exceedingly effectively. A masterpiece indeed |
by Tammie
Woah, beautiful and really great imagery. You did a fantastic job =] Keep it up |
by KaKaSHi
All ur acrostics deserve a well earned 5/5 from me...like i said before...u truely have a talent...ur comments are constructive and helpfull..thank you |
LOVE IT!!! Recommend it to any students who need a reference. |
I LOVE ITT |