Damn i think this is really good i liked it alot i give u a 5/5 ~kristina~

That was really good...interesting way of abreviating ya words in ya writtings...i liked the last stanza....I wish I could win bac yur luv
But I know its not a game
No matter how hard we would try
Things will never be the same....it just all came together with that

This IS really good, I doubt my poem was as good as this^^