Strangely this sounds like it could be lyrics....in a way. Not sure what to say except that it was way different than anything that I've read in awhile. Loved the lines about the jackyl though. Thought that had a strong impact. Of course some shaky words/flow in the beginning but it managed to smooth out to a really cool ending. Enjoyed what this was. |
I totally agree with the above: there is a strong lyrical element to this which I found very powerful. |