Comments : The evergreen maple leaf

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    "I'm here waiting on the sidelines
    I feel like a spectator
    But want to be put in the game
    I want to feel the pain and I want to go insane"

    A hockey allegory? This is the best bit of the poem. After this the flow becomes disjointed and a little too pleading. But you end on quite a positive, emboldened note, which is great to see!