by Seth Eckel Jul 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Deep inside my chest |
I'm curious as to why you stopped rhyming for the 9th to 12th lines. Also bear in mind that proper punctuation really is a HUGE help in emphasizing what you're trying to say in poetry. |
by SweetxMisery
That was really good. |
by *_Clara_*
I loved that poem i think i was beautiful |