The story of a haunt

by Seth Eckel   Jul 5, 2006


Hey there, Hello?
Do you see me?
You look right through me but im right here
You see right through me, you looked right through the love deep inside
Your doing it right now right here
Looking through me
Peircing my heart those beautiful eyes
Is there something behind me?
Are you listening to me?
Hello?
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  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    This is very inventive. You say a heck of a lot in very few words, and that can be VERY hard to do.

    Of the stuff I've read so far, this is the stand-out poem. Good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    I liked the poem, a lot. Not sure exactly why... but I did :).

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