I like this. I love photography, and stormclouds and dead trees are a particular favourite topic of mine, so I found it very easy to visualize your words. Having siad that, your line "It slowly fades away leaving only a memory which too will someday die and fade away." might work better as this: |
by kia
That was great. Best imagery i've heard. Really helped to show what you were talking about. I understood ur theory too. Thats rather a shoker by itself. :P. Take care |