This moment is all we have

by Seth Eckel   Jul 5, 2006


In this moment in my life I finally know the answer to all the unanswered questions ever asked and left to be.

I know why we are here.

I know why we live, why we die, and why we exist.

Oddly the answer is simple.

We live to die and die because that is all that is left to be done in life.

Existance now that is but a dream, the dream in which it all happens.

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  • 18 years ago

    by kia

    Short and to the point. Very deep and thoughtful. One of those things i'd never stop to ponder well done. Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I disagree with Heather. I think it weas a bad poem with a lot of potential. You should elaborate on your theory in a manner that will compel us to read it in it's entirety. And the structure isn't really that strong here either.

    You've picked a good philosophical topic but it just doesn't really have the depth that the subject matter deserves.

    Please accept this as the constructive criticism it is meant to be.

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    Good poem.
    I liked it, it was insiteful, and made me think.
    5/5

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