Das Zooo mooi, geweldig geschreven, geweldige woorden; alleen voelk me er weer klote door =) hvj
xx

Hide beneath the surface
of a fake lost me
the person that because of you
was gone, and now carefree
[I liked that stanza alot.]

This was a really good poem. I think I seen what contest you entered this into. Anyways. Good luck with that. I'm sure you'll do great! Keep up the great work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Thought that it was going to end on a different note but it was good. A similar theme played by many but this had this nice use of words and well the flow in itself was off every now and then but the content and words made up for it. Cool write.
~Faith-less