Dove (Acrostic)

by LadyPearl   Jul 5, 2006


Diamonds splattered against rising night
Obscure wings of transparent doves
Vivid Innocence glimmering in their sight
Engulfing the world in their precious love

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  • 18 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Prove that poetry can be short and very very good
    great choice of words
    well done, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Short but wonderfully written!! God word choice!!! 5/5!! Keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kara !

    What a lovely little acrostic. Beautiful imagery.

    "Vivid Innocence glimmering in their sight"

    I adore that line. It reminded me a happy memory I have. Should innocence have a capital I though?

    Another very good piece. x

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Simple but beautiful, great word choice.
    xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was very short but very beautifully writen, and I really liked it. 5/5. Excellent poem.

    Ravyn

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