That was very short but very beautifully writen, and I really liked it. 5/5. Excellent poem.

Ravyn

Simple but beautiful, great word choice.
xxALLYxx

What a lovely little acrostic. Beautiful imagery.

"Vivid Innocence glimmering in their sight"

I adore that line. It reminded me a happy memory I have. Should innocence have a capital I though?

Another very good piece. x

Short but wonderfully written!! God word choice!!! 5/5!! Keep it up!!

Prove that poetry can be short and very very good
great choice of words
well done, keep it up