Nelle, this was great! I think it expressed a lot of emotion and details. I really liked it. Great job, keep it up!! You`re talented, and I see you`ve got tons of poems. Now I know where to go when I`m bored. =D
Have a great day, and, 5/5.

**Samantha Hollywood

Amazing poem! there is soo much emotion that you described and expressed really well. It flows nicely too. It was sad though...But good! 5/5 Keep it up!