Mystery

by King of The Elements   Jul 5, 2006


The cut bleed yes it bleeds
blood red with the bed stained
all i can think of is the angel
the beautiful fairy that would save me so
Kept me up when i was down
thoughts so deep within me
how could i know that one day you would be with me
maybe a dream or a fantasy
maybe maybe
the dream saved me all i know i was weak after i stopped
but i am here now thanks little fairy/angel

i try i know its not the best

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  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Wow that was really weird yet still managed to suck me in! It could of used some more enticing words but I still felt your emotion talking about cutting!

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Nice job. Might be a bit easier to follow if you put it into a block format rather than all those dotty lines.
    Great potential.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nick Hanshaw

    Not bad at all!!! with a li more practice it will be amazing!! keep it up man!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    No more cutting!!!!!plz........

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