Wow!! thats so sad -shead a tear- i mean it im sorry too i lvoe this poem so much i love depression poems they make me happy ( i know odd lol) xoxroxyxox

That was a very impressive depressing story...I love the way you wrote it. The rhythem was fantastic. Keep it up.

That was really good. your a good writter keep it up.
always&forever
-jennifer-

O wow---Amazing write, it brought tears to my eyes--The flow is amazing and the emotion in it is expressed really clearly and strongly-I love it--5/5 Keep it up =-)

Dearest Elysium,(Fallen/Esham)

I don't know why you changed your screenname.But Your poem is really beautiful and emotions are really high and strong.Loved it.Keep it up.
MISS YOU>
Sreeram

That poem was heart touching and wonderful

That poem was heart touching and wonderful

Wow, you are really very good. I only wish I could write like this. Very Nice!
Burning~Wings

U had a child?

BRILLIANT!

Cute poem ^^

Well i think that exam went terrific if thats what u used. nice ;D

Excellent poem good job

Great work!!...lovely poem....this 1 has it's own charm and it's wonderfully penned!
kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

Wow, sucha sad poem, but also very nice and beautiful, its a very emotional poem.

Touchingly so sad, it made me cry. Wonderfully written, I like this the best so far, and i am glad that I got a chance to read it. You deserve nothing less than 10, but alas I can onlky give you 5/5

Wow
if this happened
im horribly sorry
I really enjoyed the consistent flow
I liked the rhythm
everything was jsut excellent
wonderful job

Aww this is so cute! a very beautiful poem! well done! and congrats for the A grade :) keep writing! and once again another AMAZING poem 5/5!

Loved the rhymes, the flow and strucutre were both good. You have a lot of talent and a way with words. Great job! Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

This is a great piece. I like it, although i dont have a daughter. But it was very nicely written :)

Oh & the 'the' in my poem, was a typo. Thanks for pointing it out though :)