You better have got a day.
This was one of the best poems I have ever read!
I absolutely loved it.
It brings tears to the eyes and has so much meaning to it.
Wow, is all I can say.

Very nice write! god Bless!

This is so beautiful. Touches deeply every reader. Everything was just simpley perfect in it. very sad and still warm and sweet.
Keep up the great work :)
5/5

I thought the poem was perfect for the topic you were writing about, and it captured the readers attention. The flow was great and the imagery was perfect, I loved the 5th stanza because those are times in a childs life that parents remember the most. amazing write 5/5

It was really beaitful and touching..you really reflected the feelings of a mum so well that nothing left to say.and I know all mums can relate to this
So well done ely,
Take care
Laura

How you portrayed the sentiments of a grieving mother is totally fascinating. It's one of the major highlights of this poem! Due to the passionate progression of this piece, I thought that it actually happened to you. Haha. How silly of me!

It's a masterpiece, m'dear. =]

Regards,
Marian

There would have been something wrong with that teacher if they wouldn't have given you an A. This poem is very sad and very touching. You are really a great poet. I hope you keep up the good work. =] 5/5 on this. Simply amazing.

This is beautiful. =] Love the emotion in it.. I totally agree that you got an 'A' for it! =D A 5/5 for you ^^
xxx

This was a sad story. im sorry
but it was a great poem.
i like it alot
great job
keep it up
5/5
xoxo
mEgAn**

I love your poem...
Such words make things heavy to the heart...
I definitely can relate to this!

Im happy you got A in school.

This is beautiful..so sad that I have tears in my eyes and yet so wonderfully written that I can't help but be drawn right into the piece from the beginning.

Imagery was beautifully created yet again, and your flow was spot on throughout the piece.

I loved the emotions of both love and loss in this, I thought it made for a powerful transistion, and you wrote this piece with so much beauty and elegance.

Wow, this made me cry. you did a great job,