I could'vebeen her.
**A space is missing.**

I couldve been Mrs. Hanshaw.
I couldve loved and lived.
I wouldve screamed when no one saw
**Missing the apostrophes.**

I lubb you. Okay? Always.
Pink Glue
Toni

Hey great poem. You really did a great job describing the situation with all of the deep emotions. Keep up the good work.

-Jason

Awww cute poem

Aww i really liked this poem is cute good job.........i havent talked to you in aa long time i miss you i love you bye hun