Indifference

by Ariana   Jul 5, 2006


Save me from this misery
help me help me help me help me
my weakness may be pathetic
but your indifference is cruel.
I've tried so long to be strong but now,
I'm tiring of this charade.
Don't test my endurance any longer;
this is the depth of my despair.
My weakness may be pathetic
but your indifference is cruel.
And I may be young and youthful -
but my mind is dying,
don't take my sanity,
because I'm losing my way.
Why won't you help me?
Help me help me help me help me.
My weakness may be pathetic
but your indifference is cruel.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is such a sad plea, such a heartfelt emotional write-and you are not pathetic are weak-just very sensitive and emotional.I like the way you repeat the 3rd and 4th stanza, it brings emotional impact to the piece.But you are stronger than you give yourself credit for, and I know from personal experience things I thought devestating were later not as bad, just remember and believe(as I learned), this too shall pass.Best wishes.

    Gary J

  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    " My weakness may be pathetic but your indifference is cruel " .... amazing....shock me to the core, everytime i read it i got chills....very well done.... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    The indifferently cruel usually do not/will not, help....
    I recommend you ask someone else...like....your Guardian Angel, maybe..........Good poem...appreciate the depth of sincerity..

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