by WEIRDO ^.^ Jul 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Have u forgotten me in this lonely place? Or has your love just vanished in this broken dream? What about the promises you said would never end? When you told me that forever you would be with me. Or were they just lies to make me fall? A fantasy you created in my lonely heart, thoughts and feelings that were never true. But maybe it was my fault for believing your words, for closing my eyes and trusting you with my life, or for believing in dreams that were far from my reach. And yet my only mistake was having tis felling for you that is love! |
by Whittney
Hey this is a really good poem. you have a great gift, keep up the good work and thanks so much for the comment on mine!~Whittney |
Sorry comp froze i didn't mean to put twice. but they poem of mine u commented on i added some more to it check it out plz! |
Very Creative i like the wording! |
Very Creative i like the wording! |