If u can think of a title idea i am open to anything

by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*   Jul 6, 2006


I hold your photo in my hand

Your glassy eyes burn my skin

The hellish sound of your screams

Resound in my head

As you held me down

The thoughts running through my head

Your arms rip my skin

The feeling deep inside

Kills any hope

Of innocence i had left.

Your fingers

Your lips.

The gentle cries

That my lips emit

Drown the thoughts of leaving

Im in to deep

Ive gone to far

I wont give up without a fight.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    'Burning Skin' .. It's a bit horrific, but it's the best I could come up with.
    Now I liked this poem a LOT. It was amazing... Different from the rest you read like this... great job.. .Keep it up.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Yeh i fink u shud choose too deep n poem is GREAT!!!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SeppensAngel

    For the title how about "too deep" or "i won't give up"

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