Comments : If u can think of a title idea i am open to anything

  • 18 years ago

    by SeppensAngel

    For the title how about "too deep" or "i won't give up"

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Yeh i fink u shud choose too deep n poem is GREAT!!!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    'Burning Skin' .. It's a bit horrific, but it's the best I could come up with.
    Now I liked this poem a LOT. It was amazing... Different from the rest you read like this... great job.. .Keep it up.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5