It's beautiful how you've conveyed a deep message using the timeless lessons of Nature.

great write!

peace
shobhana

Beautiful and inspiring, awesome flow!

The ending was perfect!!! i love how the ending of the poem brings you back to the beginning. the message is deep and sincere. Great write!

Isnt it beautiful how very simple life can be when we take away the complexity we create within it for ourselves...nature is a perfect example of that. Your poem has a freshness of reality in it though most would find it hard to see past the clouds you were bring a much needed light...great write Steven your a true talent my friend :o) Risa

*your words bring a much needed light darn butter fingers LOL

Steven your poem was very invigorating! You have touched on one of the simplest pleasure in life and that is to feel the warm sun on our face. Too many times we take that for granted. Thanks for reminding me how good that really feels in this busy world.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

This directs me in two ways... The beautiful beginning of a fresh summer... Mixed so delightfully with a fresh start, cleansed by the summer sun! Beautiful and so peaceful.

Your poetry is so refreshing and beautiful. And the part I love the most, is that even if I read this poem more than once, I will always find something new. (If that makes any sense at all lol) But anyways... keep up the beautiful writing and take care!

I really wish that i could write something as beautiful as this. amazing job, i loved every word..... take care,

A nice write, the sense of cleansing and rebirth, the beauty of the life giving sun and a new beginning of a fresh day, yet containing a deeper meaning than a first reading would suggest.Excellent write.

GaryJ