Comments : Your Gone

  • 18 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    You were happy and healthy here on the earth.
    But the angels they took you away.
    You are gone from here, and gone from us.
    Till we meet again some day

    ^This was my favorite part. It really got me into the poem. I undestand how it feels to lose a loved one. This poem is sad, but really shows how it affected you. Good work..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by not a poet

    So sad. deepest condolences!
    keep up the writting tho, great job!