As the sun brings down our summer heat
And beachy sands sink in our feet
When darkness always frightens light
I ponder upon simple life

^I absolutely loved that part. You're such a good writer. This poem made me smile. It's one of the best i've read. 5/5

Nice poem as always,it makes me think and wonder as i do, the same question come to my mind WHY?
very nice poem again 5/5

OMG this was so well written hun...Ur really great at what you do and its going to get u somewhere someday...ULL SEE...o and thanks for the pep talk..i really appriciated all of ur advice ---LUV YAA

You REALLY are my favorite poet on this site, Sarah. Each poem is written perfectly and flawlessly with words I always WISH I could have had the brains to string together. You make every poem so lovely!!

I just wanted to say the poem is true to most even me i always ask those questions i wish i could write like you i am not that good just read my poems and you can tell but i loved you poem maybe you can show me how to write like that someday