Cool i like this poem im a fan of deepness and depression i love it well done xoxroxyxox

4/5

It was good, captivating to some degree [I did finish reading it after all], but it could be better written. It keeps the same theme all the way through, so it's not dodgy, and has a strong connection to the title.

I do hate to lave a comment if my rating is below 5/5, but it couldn't hurt

Kepp writing, everything you read or write helps to some degree.

I liked it but to me it seemed kinda fored but good nonetheless
4/5 for this one
~HazE

Loved it *Keep up the excellent work*